Reviewed by -jolyne-
Author: Dragonrat703
Title: Gateway
Genre: Science Fiction
Cover 5/5
I really like it ! nice job on it <3
Blurb 2/5
- it just seems overall super confusing and way too much information at once. it needs to be cut down because i had no idea what it was talking about.
- unless it's a fanfic or something
Title 5/5
- really keeps the mystery and overall, i just have no qualms with it !
Plot :9/10
- i liked it, but at the beginning, it just seemed too cliche. the origin especially
Character development : 14/15
- i didn't really see much character development from summer, and that was in her pov. there were a lot of thoughts and such, but that's not really character development, more so character reporting
- i liked the driver and his interactions, though and he was very believable. part of me even wants HIS story haha
Spelling and grammar 10/10
- thank you so much for having proper spelling and grammar. bless up
Overall : 9/10
- there were just a few things i didn't like about it, so overall i'd say it's pretty good !
- all i'd say to improve on for now since it's finished is to break up the chapters and the paragraphs. some of them were super long
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