Reviewed by Key-Keeper Ava Avocados12
Author: @AutumnElf555
Title: Steel Flight
Genre: fantasy
Review:
Cover:
2/5
The cover is not very eye-catching and the title is barely visible
Blurb:
4/5
The blurb is quiet enticing and draws the reader in.
Title:
4/5
The title is eye-catching and unique.
Plot:
8/10
The plot is very well developed and flows nicely.
Character Development:
12/15
The character development is strong and matches the plot, they could use little more description
though.
Spelling and Grammar:
8/10
A few small mistakes that have been pointed out by readers in comments but not fixed.
Overall:
8/10
Other Comments:
AutumnElf555 you have put your own unique and creative spin on this classic story, which is a real
talent. The characters are diverse and interesting along with the universe you have created.
Your strength: Describing facial expressions and dialogue. I also greatly admire your ability to switch point of views and take on the mannerisms and mindset of Jack and Skai, they have vastly different
personalities which are portrayed through their thoughts and actions, a real skill.
Your weakness: I have read eight chapters and all I know about what Jack and Skai look like is that he
has green eyes and she has blonde-brown hair. You could also add more figurative language such as
similes and metaphors.
Overall, it was a pleasure to read your book and I would highly recommend it to anyone looking for a
unique, fantasy story.
-Key Keeper Ava
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