rewrite??

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Hey guys,

It's been a while, but I was wondering if I should rewrite this story. Because I'm not that satisfied with it. I was hoping I could get some feedback before I rewrite some more. Some of it will stay the same, but some of it will change like the later parts to make it longer. I was also wondering if I should rewrite my story "The Frost" which I had published last year which got 800+ reads. I think I might just rewrite both. Let me know your opinions, please. I will delete this "chapter" once I'm satisfied with my rewrite and maybe unpublish some chapters.

Thanks,
Liv <3

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