Tears rolled down Rose's face. With each swipe, the whip tore through her shirt. Even so, she was getting it while wearing armour. But I couldn't bear to watch...
It was quickly over. Rose's punishment was 30 seconds long, but by the the scorch marks left on her semi-revealed back, it looked like she had been whipped a lot longer. My father turned to me.
2 guards spun me around and fastened me to a column before shredding the fabric of my muddied shirt apart, revealing my almost undamaged skin. I was at my father's mercy entirely. And I know my father is not one to show mercy.
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It rips through my back as ruthless as fire. Flames course through my veins, and blood drizzles down.
2,3,4
They scorch my being each in turn, and my muscles spasm at every crack.
5,6,7,8
My insides shiver. I can't take this... I'm just not strong enough. Panicked, I fight against the chains. I feel flesh start to peel, sop to the ground.
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The chains are tightened, pinned to the wall, I let out a wild shriek before the whip hits me again, stones crackling onto my skin.
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The blood runs steadily on, my back now a murdurous crimson. My eyes roll back..
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Avatar Rose: Dawn
FanficRose, a 16 year old girl who happens to be the avatar, is banished from the Earth Empire once they found out her identity. Of course, this is because the next avatar was meant to come from the Fire Nation, where a plot to take over the world is br...
