Atonement?

P: Way back when (Atonement? Version) T: Thoughful

Intro: Chapter 18 in Venture rewrite.

Long long time ago

like, once upon a time

This is the second time I've sung I his song

And I'll never get tired of it

Because

Ling long time ago

Way back when

Because I still miss those times when I would just 'jump in'

There was a time, when I had a friend in sight

Lets play with Legos, Pokemon, and watch yu-gi-oh all over again

Or could you come back from the army my dear friend

because you're brother's kind of getting out of hand

We're even older

But I still feel younger, than before

Oh.. Whoa

I'm looking back

On those photographs

They need to an update

And I wish we could a last

Just retake to replace the ones from before

Lets replace the time from six years to four

Because long long time ago, we used to be there

At your house, playing games like battleship And Nintendo

Before there was a tree house but now there's one that we don't use

You built it but now it's just 'there'

I kind of miss it playing in that tree house

But we're too old old now

Right?

Do you remember when we were best friends

But now it's still as if

We're silhouettes

Ease don't go, I wish the best

But I still remember way back when

When you used to be there

But now you're far

Your graduating for the second time

The you'll go

You won't be gone forever

I just hope you'll come home safer

Conclusion: Edward, Adam, and Jon are three brothers that I've known for all my life. Edward has known me for all my life, I've known Adam for all of his life, and Jn has entered all of our lives during my middle school and Edwards early high school. The original poem was aimed towards Adam and Edward. This poem is directed towards Edward because he just graduated from training in the army. I miss this guy greatly and I hope I'll be able to hang around him in the future. He's a great inspiration to me. -Thanks Edward even though you'll never read this.