BOOK: Mystery Of Dark Meadows
BY: izzah4972613
REVIEW BY: Gise_lliana
CHAPTERS READ: 27
Cover and Title: 4.5/5
The cover was simple yet catchy. The font used as well as it's placement was pretty perfect and pleasing to the eyes. Your name at the bottom was very creatively designed. I'd suggestion would be to use a better font or increase quality of the cover in order for the content above the title which seems to be a qoute or something of that sort to be readable.
Title was interesting and rather creative. It was good enough to catch the viewer's eye. My only suggestion would be to add "the" after "of" in order to make it grammatically more appropriate.
Blurb: 3/5
Blurb was short, sweet and fluid. But in order to achieve it's actual purpose it needs to be enhanced more. That being said it requires interesting and catchy dialogues, more tragic events to make viewers invested into it and a perfect structure. Taking consideration into these aspects will lead to a well made blurb.
Plot and Structure: 8.5/10
The plotline is very captivating. It fits the mystery/thriller genre perfectly while blending with the themes of love, passion, family etc. I love how everything is perfectly flows. Things aren't messy and alignment of the scenes is in proper sequential order. More usage of descriptive language is adviced
Structurally speaking, you have used more pictures rather than the words. This makes it less effective in terms of a good written book. Moreover for appearance, clothes as well as places you can easily describe rather than using pictures for the very purpose. The most shocking part is that it's not that you lack the ability to do so. Rather you are quite a genius at that and the evidence for this would be the perfectly described scene where Mathew, Felix, Hayden and others are gathered for the dinner as arranged by their school when they are on a trip.
Character development: 3/5
The character development is not very significant at the current point in the story. There are too many characters involved and each one shall go under a rapid development in order to enhance each of their dynamic personalities.
Grammar and Vocabulary: 3.5/5
The grammar was good but can be better if you edit the storyline and also proofread thoroughly to avoid any sort of errors. There are many spelling mistakes which diminishes the quality of the story and doesn't do justice to such a good plotline. Vocabulary is not bad but not excellent as well. Adding more new words as well as limiting the repetition of the same words will enhance the content.
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
A very good story with great potential. It has got everything from murder to mystery covered and is a book recommendation for the mystery/thriller enthusiasts. Working on the above mentioned aspects will make you reach to greater levels. Goodluck!
Total: 31.5/40
