OC REWRITE - IRIS BLAZE

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Okay.

I've been meaning to do this for a while.

I'm gonna rewrite Iris.

In the book I wrote for her initially, I made her seem like a Mary Sue (which she isn't supposed to be), so I'm going to tone her down A LOT

Again, I'm no longer an MLP fan, but I still want to give my first OC the proper treatment 😅

But anyway....

Here's a quick doodle of her

Here's a quick doodle of her

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So there's the girly

I haven't drawn horse bodies in so long so it looks bad, don't judge me XD

I'm gonna keep her design. I felt like I should've changed it and give her more color, but at the same time, keeping her the way she is would probably satisfy my younger MLP fan self. The only thing I did change was the length and waviness of her hair, but that's not too much

Anyways

Her coat is white, her markings are black. Woah, so edgy. Her mane's (and tail's) main color is black, but she has thick strands of color in her mane and tail— a rose pink stripe in the middle and a blue one on each side of the pink (with black in between, of course...)

Her eyes are icy blue, but they're much darker around the center of her eye. She's got a cool gradient effect and shit (I really love playing around with color in the eyes, okay? 😂)

So she's obviously a pegasus. Her wings start white but they fade to black at the ends.

Her cutie mark is a black lightning bolt with six dots on the sides and one on the bottom— there are three rose pink dots and four blue dots and it's in an alternating pattern, obviously.

Her hair is still spiky, but I gave more floofiness to her hair since her old hair was literally straight and spiky so she looked much edgier than she should 😅

She's not edgy guys ;-;

Alright.

Backstory time.

She didn't always have the markings. She was struck by a black lightning bolt with some power in it, and she earned the markings and some magic abilities. She's not as powerful as a regular unicorn, let alone an alicorn, so boom, no more Mary Sue.

See, in the original version, Iris was LITERALLY a Mary Sue. I'm ashamed of it. In the old version, when she was struck by the bolt, Iris earned not only alicorn level powers (that for some reason included shape shifting), but she also got a "dark/evil" side that would take over her when she's angry.

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