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Estimina "Mina" Aquarius

Submitted by: @Antisocial_Freak_5

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Fandom or Original Work: Original Work

Name: Estimina "Mina" Aquarius

Plot: Mina goes to war when she turns 15 years old (against her will, of course, she didn't wanna go to war). I'm not going to spoil too much
Hmm, that's kind of strange... Did the military draft her or was she forced to lie and disguise herself?

Age: 15-17

Race: Caucasian

Background: Mina (don't call her Estimina unless you want you head chopped off) lived in a household with her best friend,  Cassiopeia and Cassiopeia's mother, Antilia. She lives there because her mother was distraught after Mina's father didn't return from war and couldn't take care of her. She got herself together after a year, but Mina continues to live with Cassiopeia, but visits her mother a lot. You see, Mina lives in a place called De stellarum Homines (translating to People Of Stars in Latin). The people of the stars and the people of the sun have been at war for decades. The people of the stars and the people of the sun live in two different earths (there are 7 earths, each one in a different universe) Each earth is different than the other. De stellarum Homines is the earth where it's always night time. In De sol Homines, translating to people of sun, night time doesn't exist. Yes, they sleep, but it never gets dark. I know it sounds unrealistic, but keep in mind that this is a fantasy)
Oooh, this universe sounds really interesting.

Talents: She's really good with a sword

Sexuality: She's pansexual

Friends: Cassiopeia...that's about it, she's very introverted

Significant Other: She develops a crush on a girl named Lillie when she goes to war, but Lillie is part of the people of the sun.
OH SNAP. I LIVE FOR UNAPPROVED RELATIONSHIPS.

Appearance: She has an oval face and large blue eyes, some acne, shoulder length, oily dark red hair, short eyelashes, 5'4 when the series starts and 5'7 when it ends, freckles splattered across her whole body (seriously, she has freckles on her arms, legs, face, and stomach)
I absolutely love that she's a realistic character, freckles, acne, oily hair (CUZ GIRL I RELATE)...

Distinguishing features: her freckles give her away immediately

Habits: She bites her nails a lot, twirls her hair in her finger, bites her lip, twiddles her fingers, asks for something when she knows she's allowed to have it

Mental illnesses: She has ADHD

Self confidence level: It really depends on the situation. She tends to blame herself when something bad happens, but she's usually very confident and can seem kind of arrogant to others because of it
Me.

Ruled by emotion or logic: 50% emotion and 50% logic

Introvert or extrovert: Introvert

Strengths: She's ambitious and goes for what she wants, she's very loyal

Weaknesses: She's extremely impatient, she can't stand not being in charge, she's annoyed easily, she tends to trust people too easily
Honestly I love that she can't stand not being in charge, like it seems so realistic for me for some reason.

Oh, by the way if those names sound weird, they're all names of constellations
I LOVE IT SO.

Constructive Criticism: Not too much to comment on, but if I had to point out something, it'd be that I don't understand how she got in the war. But that's just because I don't know the full story, so just make it believable.

On another note, there appears to be a few things that wouldn't flow well into the book, like a few of her habits. But then again, I don't know the full story... carry on! :)

Intrigue: 82%