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Ludovica Arianna Marino

Fandom or Original Work: Harry Potter fandom
Ooo, I'm excited to review this one!

Name: Ludovica Arianna Marino
Very pretty... but a bit of a mouthful, yes?

Age: 15
Ooo, a fourth or fifth year, very nice.

Race: Italian
I don't see very many characters who are Italian, I'm very intrigued.

Background: Ludovica was born and raised in Italy, and lived there all her life. A few weeks before her eleventh birthday, her family moved to Britain, as a part of her father's job. She was unpacking the day of her eleventh birthday, when she was smacked in the back of the head by something hard. Surprised, she turned around to see a letter on the floor. After opening the letter, she ran to her parents, to see her twin brother had gotten one too. They were both overjoyed to be going to Hogwarts. Though it took their parents a while to get used to it. On the train, Ludovica and her brother began to discuss where to sit in Italian, catching the attention of a girl sitting alone. She invited them to sit with her in there, and they accepted. After a bit of talking, they learned that her name was Robin. When they arrived at Hogwarts, They were each sorted into Ravenclaw. Throughout the years they remained friends, and eventually invited one more person into their friend group. His name was Chris. They all became inseparable. So when students have started going missing, the four decide-being the stupid teenagers they are-to look for the students themselves.
Interesting... this book seems very elaborate.

Talents/skills: baking, singing, drawing

Sexuality: Aromantic/asexual
I'm excited to see this come into action in the book!

Significant other: none

Appearance: An average height girl with Albinism, including white hair that goes to the small of her back, bright blue eyes, and pale skin. Usually wears the Hogwarts uniform with the tie in a bow.
I don't know why or how, but Albinism is becoming more and more common among OCs, and I think it's used to make characters special. I don't know, I feel as though it's romanticized. I'm not too fond of that play.

Distinguishing features: Her white hair

Habits: Bouncing her leg up and down when sitting, tapping her hand on the table when she's writing

Self confidence level: She is confident, but not to the point that she's cocky.
Relatable

Ruled by emotion or logic: A mix

Introvert or extrovert: Technically an ambivert, which means that she enjoys company and being alone.
Ooo, I like that.

Strengths: Running, Charms

Weakness: climbing, DADA

Constructive Criticism: I really like the plot so far... just not the Albinism for reasons that I've already stated.

Intrigue: 75%, due to the fact that I'm in love with the plot, just not the Albinism, it seems like it's not crucial to the plot and it's used to give the character a special difference, seems very forced and romanticized to me.