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Oliver Howard Stark

Submitted by: lamixed   

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Name: Oliver Howard Stark
Ooo, I'm excited!

Age: 18 (backstory) 25 (plot)
I love this age for characters, honestly.

Book: Civil War: Secret Invasion

Parents: Anthony Edward Stark , Hannah Alexandra Stark (née Even)
Oh dang. Second (maybe third?, if you count Peggy and them) generation according to MCU.

Friends: Holloway Steve Barnes (Winter soldier son), Natalia Barton (Hawkeyes Daughter), Tennyson Buchanan Rogers (Captain America's son), Trygve "Ty" Thorson (Thor's Son), Luke Maximoff (Wanda's son), T'Chaba (Black Panther's son), Adelaine Wollen (Peterson's (my OC)  daughter), Tyler Holloway Bond (Callum (my OC Son)), Archer Lokison (Loki's Son),  Wally Rhodes,Lee Allens,Ann Rupert.
Hm. I'm glad he's friends with everyone's children, but to me, I feel like that wouldn't be entirely true. I feel like he'd probably get along bad with at least one person that's included in his friend list.

Background: Oliver is the elder of the Stark children. He grew up in a happy family but his mother trained him (with his siblings) in case anything would happen. At 8 he discovers his powers (from his mother) and learned to control them. Except that he had an privilege childhood. At teens he showed interest in becoming an agent. Tony didn't accept because he thought that Oliver wasn't mature enough to have such responsibilities and Hannah said no because she didn't want her children to be in that business. Later an extra terrestrial race was sent on earth and Avengers and MISS agents were sent. All kids were sent into safe places. But it been for years that none of the Avengers had returns neither did the allied agents. Oliver ,Casey , Alex, Joey and Holloway managed to escape the safe place with Anthony covering them. When they are outside they see that it's an quasi post apocalyptic world. Now they have no choice but to collaborate to get their family back and understand what happened.
I'M INTO IT.

Book Plot: Yall remember Civil War? Trust no one.

Physique: Oliver is an attractive man with dark cherry red hair and green eyes. He's 1m84 (6 ft.) with an medium muscular stature. He wore chic and casual clothes.
I like him! But there's no physical flaws in sight. I feel like there would be some scars from training, at least. Maybe a bit of a crooked nose from it being broken before?

Skills: Melee combat, genius intellect, stratege,

Powers: Energy manipulation, super  telekinesis , telepathy. Superhuman strenght, stamina, speed and reflexes, healing factor,senses.
Dang. That's a lot.

weaknesses: Poisons, High rayons and ultra vibrations, damageable skin, healing factor is way more slow when it comes to vital points such as heart lungs ,eyes and hand (both are main points of power when it come to them in can take years to heal.) , Mark XVI armor that can allow user to keep it up.

Sexual: Straight

Significant other; Sandra Banner

Features: That hair

Level: 10 out 10
Oh dang, he's cocky. I love it.

63 logic 27 emotions.

Extrovert

Trivia

Likes ACDC

Alcohol and him is the biggest love story
Just like his father.

Ty and Him are so close.

Bff is Casey

Personality; Oliver is an playboy who enjoy life and all. He is a meneur he is confident and is very good at listening and reading people. He is pretty smart. Charisma. However Oliver seems to sometimes be too sure can be a manipulative one and will put his focuses first unless someone he  care is in. He is stubborn sometimes and don't let emotions in which cause problems.

Constructive Criticism: I would probably add a physical flaw in there somewhere. Nothing big, maybe a slightly crooked nose. I'd also probably add a tense relationship with one of the other characters, to make it more realistic. Other than that, I'm really intrigued!

Intrigue: 87%