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Dawn Thomas

Submitted by: @IDontCareImASinner.

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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~~Dawn~~

Fandom: Original

Name: Dawn Thomas
I love her name.

Age: 7-8
Aww, cute! She's so young!

Race: Human

Background: She was born in a poor country of 1936 Germany. Her parents were both living as middle class, slightly in debt because of a recent war that has ended. During her 4 years of living, she started to talk to imaginary friends, one being a tall man and the other being a shredded woman. Her parents thought this was a phase, before she had turned 7. Her father and mother enrolled a psychiatrist and made an appointment to diagnose Dawn of her strange behavior. Two days later, she was tested and miscalculated to have schizophrenia. Now, since doctors weren't trained and researched well into this illness to prescribe or diagnose this, she was mistaken to have the measure of being kept in a closed environment, aka an Asylum. Parents were worried sick of the cost's, but being able to protect their baby girl was more important really. They went with it, enrolling her to an insane asylum in Germany. ( The rest is either in commission or its not finished. Sorry! )
So a bit before WW2. I really like this background.

Distinguishing Features: She has these little mittens in the asylum so she doesn't chew her fingers.
WHAAATTTT.

Habits: She chews her fingers when shes bored, nervous, or angry.
WHAT.

Mental Illness: MIstaken schizophrenia.

Self Confidence: All the confidence!
Ok little kids tend to have the most self-confidence. I freaking love it.

Logic 10% Emotion 90%
MEEEE.

Strengths: Shes very outgoing, having more energy means she can tired out harder. Mostly gets this from eating some tree bark from outside her window. Oh
What the heck. Tree bark? I am so confused.

Weaknesses: She's very sensitive, even seeing a cut on someone else can make her go and comfort them. She has a very active imagination and can be warped when someone talks to them.

Constructive Criticism: I love her! I'm very confused with some aspects of the story, like chewing her fingers and eating tree bark, but I don't really know the whole thing. Anyways, I'd love to read this book, I hope it's on Wattpad!

Intrigue: 84%