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Sebera

Submitted by: @VictoriaClark075

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Fandom or Original Work: Original

Name: Sebera
Ooo, interesting name, I've never heard it before.

Age: 24
Props to you! I think this is a very good age to be writing characters at! :)

Race: Early Human, born in modern day France/Spain region

Backstory: Set in pre-history, during the Ice Age. Sebera was born with the oddity of white hair, due to her mother being a Spirit Handler (a person who tries to lead the dead to the next life) As it was taboo for a Spirit Handler to have a child her mother was shunned, and Sebera was raised by a male Spirit Handler and his mate. They taught her from birth to be the same as her mother, and she had an immediate affinity for it. Unfortunately, being an inexperienced child attracted evil spirits to her, who she believed were "friends" that she could play with. Bad luck struck her small clan, and as she grew she realized it was her "Friends" leading her to go to the Spirit Handler and together they expelled all but the strongest. He follows her through out her life, bringing bad luck that makes most people wary of her. She has to travel from place to place, trying to find a strong enough Spirit Handler to help her.
Oh dang! This is a really interesting plot! I love all things supernatural and fantasy-ish.

Talents/Skills: She can talk to spiritual beings, she can 'feel' when others are hurt or in pain, she's pretty good at fixing things (due to the "bad luck")
Me, but I can't fix it haha.

Sexuality: Pansexual

Significant Other: None, though she has had a few prospective mates that never fulfilled a mating ritual (We may call it a marriage of sorts but you are only required to share a living space and care for any children born together)
Huh, that's a pretty interesting concept that you've changed about the world... I LOVE IT. To me, it shows so much world development and oh my goodness I am so in love with this world already.

Appearance: 5'4" Brown Eyes, White Hair, muscular with a bit of curve to the hips and thighs, tan skin
Hm, she's kinda short for 24.

Distinguishing Features: White hair, Black tattoo of a bird on her left cheek
WOAH.

Habits: She tends to talk for people in conversations without thinking about it,
I bet that gets on people's nerves. She's so cute.

Mental Illnesses: N/A

Self-Confidence Level: Around mid-low, she doesn't really think she can do much, though if pushed to anger she will show off
That's really interesting! I haven't seen that in too many characters but I really really like it!

Ruled by Emotion/Logic or Mix: Emotion 65% and Logic 35% she often tries to use logic, but falls back to Emotion

Introvert or Extrovert: As a child she was an Extrovert, but after she found her 'friends' to be evil, she became Introverted and shied away from others

Strengths: Understanding Spirits of Humans, Small Amounts Magic, Traveling Survival, Fixing Broken Items, Running, Climbing

Weaknesses: Attracting the Right Spirits, Making friends, Fighting, Swimming,
Me too, girl.

Extra notes: N/A

Constructive Criticism: I honestly have nothing for her character. I really really love her! I hope this will be up on your Wattpad!

Intrigue: 96%