Submitted by: BitsAndFoxes
Reviewed by: thief_queen
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Fandom or Original: Original
Ooo, haven't reviewed an original story in a while.Name: Val Kormandelle
Oh, I like her name! It's very unique :)Age: 17
YES I NEED MORE OF THIS AGE.Race: Um... she's a faerie hybrid XD
I am in on this.Background: She lived in a decent, but big home in Europe. She and her twin brother were prodigies: she was very excellent at outsmarting people, and her mind worked better than a detectives, and her brother's art is known to be as good as Michelangelo. She didn't know she was a faerie-human hybrid until sent to her true home, and she learns her prodigious talents aren't a coincidence.
Wait, how did she get sent to her true home?Face Claim: Lilly Collins
Ooo, pretty!Looks: Auburn-ish hair, and hazel eyes. She's pretty tall, at 5'10".
Oh dang, that height.Sexuality: Heterosexual
Personality: Val is very open, but when it comes to investigating someone, her mouth is seemed to be taped shut and her thoughts are running through her mind like cars in a highway. She also is very smart, but that doesn't make her the introverted bookworm everyone expects from someone like her.
I'm glad she's not an introverted bookworm, I love seeing extroverted bookworms in books!Talents And Skills: She is faerie, and in a faerie myth, faerie hybrids tend to be stronger, especially the offsprings of royalty.
IS SHE THE OFFSPRING OF ROYALTY ????Significant Other: We shall see XDD
Ooo, someone has a lover!Appearance: Like I had mentioned before, Val had auburn-ish hair and hazel eyes.
Distinguishing Feature: Her ears are slightly pointed.
Yeah, that'd be pretty distinguishing.Habits: She loves to correct other people, and sometimes those can help solve a mystery...
Self-Confidence Level: High, although not to an extent where she would jump off of a cliff to prove she's confident XD
I love characters with high confidence. It gives me hope in the future of our books.Emotions VS Logic: 75% Logic, 25% Emotions
DAAANNNNGGGG SON! That would be some VERY interesting decision making right there.Introvert VS Extrovert: Extrovert
Strengths: Able to outsmart a fool with one statement
Not me, sadly.Weaknesses: Her logic clouds her emotions, so sympathy and empathy is not a big thing she shares with other.
Oh dear.Constructive Criticism: Nothing really haha. If I was being really nit-picky I'd have to say that she doesn't have any physical flaws, but that could be excused by her being a faery so...
Intrigue: 85%
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LosoweAn OC review book for those who want feedback on their characters. I give constructive criticism and I try to give non-biased feedback. Started: July 2017 Completed: October 2017 Highest Ranking: #702 in Random