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Aline Kirin

Submitted by: _LovelyBlossom_

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Original Work

Name: Aline Kirin
I've never heard this name before, I like it! It's pretty new and original for characters. :)

Plot: Aline is slowly getting fed up with her boring lifestyle. The same old routine every single day: Get up. Get ready for work. Go back home and sleep. One night, she spots what she assumes is a shooting star. Believing it is a shooting star, she wishes for something.

That particular wish being the following: "Please let something interesting happen soon in my life."

Aline didn't expect to find herself in one of the possible futures that awaited the Earth when she woke up.
WOAHHHH I LOVE ME SOME SCI-FI. YESSS!!!

Age: Twenty one {21}
Ok, personally, I love this age for characters. Like teenagers are way too young for most of the stuff that happens to characters, I need some young adults!

Race: Icelandic
Ooo, neat!

Background: Aline led an average life in Iceland. She didn't live an important one— though she wasn't necessarily worthless. She was kind of in between. Her parents were caring enough— enough for her. In school, she did have a bit of problem paying attention in school due to the fact she often drifted off into her own little world— she managed to get some kind of grip on herself later on though. She was a bit lonely. Aline had no siblings. Nobody she would call a friend— they were all more like acquaintances to her. This was due to her personality and how 'empty' she seemed to others. She had been bullied a few times. It never got to the point of it getting too physical. School was what mainly took up her time in the past. The second thing that took up her time was the cello.

She often practiced the cello with her grandmother during the days off. Her grandmother was honestly the only person that really brightened her life. Her grandmother was the ideal grandmother.

Her life was pretty much the same until she reached the age of eighteen. When the quarreling between her parents got worse— to the point where they ended up divorcing. Instead of following one of her parents, she ended up going to Canada to start a life. She continued her studies, then got a job. Nothing eventful has really happened to her in Canada.
I know that this is sad, but I love that her parents' divorce happened later in her life, because it's realistic that it could happen at any age, not just while she's a young kid. And I'm soooo glad that she could take her own life in her hands, going where she wants!

Sexuality: Pansexual.
Oh nice! One of my friends is pansexual, I hope there's an accurate representation in your book!

Significant Other: None— yet (ohohoho)
OHHHHHHHHHH

Personality: Aline is often depicted as calm and reserved. Aline is the kind of person who would just listen silently until someone addressed her— kind of invisible. She's also formal when she wants to be-- which is pretty often. She tries to make up for her social awkwardness with manners and formalities, basically. Or, well, that's around those she's not well acquainted with. Around those she's closer too, she's actually described as outgoing and chatty. She often likes to try out new things, so her speech tends to vary depending on what she's been into lately. Her role in a group of friend would be the 'supportive one'. The reason mainly is because she likes to listen to others' vent and help her fellow companions with their problems. She often does her best to cheer friends up. Aline also tends to try to focus the light on the other person rather than her, as she isn't good with attention. She likes to think she's more of a "side character".
Ok but me as a friend.