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Aspen Abirdaughter

Submitted by: @XxPetersParkerxX

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Fandom: Marvel- Thor X OC
YES!! YES!! YES!! I NEED MARVEL.

Name: Aspen Abirdaughter
I like her name, but her last name is kinda strange. It's realistic, but it makes me want to pronounce it literally "A-Bird-Daughter" but that's just me being an idiot. Yeah, I know it's pronounced differently.

Background: Aspen grew up with her mother being a maid in the royal family's castle, so she naturally became friends with Loki and Thor. After a falling out with Thor, Aspen hated him. She eventually left Asgard and came to Earth.(leaving that mark on the ground) the mark was a mystery until Thor came decades later. Everyone was trying to find the other Asgardian which made her life miserable, which gave her another reason to hate Thor.
You said she naturally became friends with Thor, but her mother was a maid, and in the beginning Thor was an arrogant guy, so I think she'd have to be the daughter of a duchess or princess to be someone he'd hang out around.

Gender: female

Appearance: black, wavy, shoulder length hair, brown eyes with blue flecks. Plump nude colored lips, and black, bold eyebrows. (Gal Gadot)
FRICK YES I LOVE HER.

Age: around 1,200 (Thor's age)

Race: Israeli on earth, normally Asgardian

Powers: Aspen is the Goddess of Heart, meaning she can toy with people's emotions, she also has strength
Ooo, I'd love to see where that comes into play.

Sexuality: heteromantic bisexual

Friends: Loki, Thor (formally and future), Odeya Freeman(OC)

Significant Other: Thor(future)

Distinguishing Features: high, sharp cheekbones. Large birthmark on shoulder. White freckles scattered across thighs.
Ugh, she's so pretty.

Habits: holds grudges, scrunches her nose a lot to push up her glasses, bites lips when nervous
Glasses...? Does she need them? Cause that wouldn't really make sense unless they were a part of a disguise or something.

Mental Illness: Aspen suffers from anxiety
I don't really understand where in her background she'd have the anxiety come from, but personally, it feels added for romantic effect. Unless there's a good reason, (or GAD runs in the family) I don't see why she would have it. (Being Asgardian and all)

Confidence level: not very high, but once and a while she gets a confidence boost

Emotion or logic: 40% emotion 60% logic

Introvert or extrovert: introvert

Strengths: she's confident in her power ability, she's usually pretty happy and makes friends quite easily

Weaknesses: she's very nice and people often mistake her for flirting. She often makes things more of a big deal then they actually are.

Ex. Notes: Aspen came to Earth in the fifties, and scientists had been researching the mark she had made on the ground. When Thor came to Earth, they had realized it was made from Asgardian travel. So then everyone had realized there was another Asgardian on Earth, everyone went crazy trying to find them, making her life a living hèll trying to cover up her tracks.

Constructive Criticism: Nothing too big. Probably just the part in her background where her mother was a made so 'naturally' she became good friends with Thor and Loki. To me that doesn't sound right, but hey, whatever. And then probably her anxiety. I don't know, it feels forced as far as I know. And if you do include it, please please please represent it correctly.

Intrigue: 84%