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Adamaris Ackerley

Submitted by: PinkCottonClouds

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Fandom or original work: It's Harry Potter
I love reviewing Harry Potter OCs.

Name: Adamaris Ackerley
Hmm, interesting name, it's cute, though!

Plot: After Draco gets his hand rejected in first year by the oh so famous, Harry Potter, He disperses from his friends and enters a compartment that he assumed to be empty only to see a small lump underneath a rather large sweater and mismatched, ridiculous (or well ridiculous in his eyes) socks. He gets curious and pokes the lump for a few times before Adamaris (whose a boy) pokes out yawning and rubbing his eyes. The whole story is basically about Draco meeting a Autistic boy and getting his loyalties tested.
Oh my goodness, this is sooooo cute.

Age: 11 in the first book

Race: English/Asian

Blood Status: Muggleborn
Aww, he's gonna get bullied for that, isn't he?

House: A rather confusing and tricky answer actually as the sorting hat took a total of two hours to sort him. After a few minutes, He was sent to stand next to the head of the house of Gryffindor and when all the first years were sorted, He was back on the stool to get sorted himself.
FREAKING ME... but what did he get sorted into?

Wand: Adamaris had a wand that was 12 inches, Dew wood and unicorn hair core however it broke into splinters on his first year when he tried to do charms and transfiguration. No one knows why but he can do wandless magic just as if he was doing regular magic with his wand, all he has to do is concentrate
Aww look at this bean go!

Background: Adamaris came from a muggle family who were both rather disgusted at the fact that people had mental illnesses since to them, that was simply a way of saying that they were 'cursed'. You see, his family believed in magic  however they believed in the wrong type--Magic as in evil curses and witches who had warts. Adamaris himself shown accidental magic more than once and because of this, his mother and father locked him away--They were terrified that the boy would suddenly curse them into dying or something of the sort. Adamaris was diagnosed with Autism when he was around 3 years old and his parents were even more terrified when they heard the news that people with this disorder were really intelligent. One day, on his 11th birthday, A owl had flew in through the window of his locked away chamber (which was basically a basement with steel doors and glass windows). He got his hogwarts letter and his parents tore it up in fear once more. Instead, he was beaten and abused because of the fear his parents had. It wasn't until the 44th owl came through that day did they shove him out of their house with the letter clutched in his hands and slammed the door shut, locking it for good measure. Adamaris was soon on the hogwarts express and took a empty compartment, falling asleep when he did so and eventually meeting Draco
Hm. Too be honest, I'm not a fan of this background. Like I can understand the parents being afraid of magic, but them beating him and locking him in a basement with steel doors is seems to be added for dramatic effect. In total, not a fan.

Talents/Skills: Adamaris is exceptionally good at wandless magic and knitting but that seems to be it.
This is so cute.

Sexuality: He doesn't know or really understand that but he knows that he'll like anybody, regardless of gender/sex as long as he likes their personality. (So basically Pansexual)

Friends: No one really likes how he acts and rather, Crabbe and Goyle are always seen around him most of the time, curtesy of Draco ordering them to keep a eye on his friend when he can't.
AWWWWW

Friends(2): Luna Lovegood is also his friend mainly because they're both creative and he's very nice to her. Though that's technically it
I live for this.

Significant Other: Draco Malfoy
AHHHHHHHHH YES

Appearance: Adamaris is a pale skinned boy whose very small for his age. He's a rather thin child with scars and bruises lining his body. His hair is rather soft and long ending at his shoulders and being a blondish white color with some of his hair being a mirage of simple colors that he dyed. His eyes are rather round and wide being a dark golden amber color with blue spots around it. His body is too thin to actually be considered healthy and his bangs are a obnoxious blue color that covers his eyes. His ears are rather elf like and his fingers are slightly crooked which makes people tease him whenever he shows them. He has a gap in his upper middle teeth and freckles cover every inch of his face.
This is 100% my opinion, but personally, I don't like his hair. Not something you have to change, just me making a note.

Distinguishing features: Adamaris' round golden amber eyes aren't easy to miss and the way he seems to have his hair in random split colors aren't either. What's most prominent about him however are his fingers. They're slightly crooked and bent but he can work perfectly fine with them.

Habits: Adamaris loves to weave flowers together to form rings, bracelets, or necklaces. He also likes to arrange his toys and socks in certain order.
All realistic habits for him.

Flaws: He's rather prone to lashing/acting out when someone changes how he does things. He tries to bottle up his feelings a lot and doesn't like to use magic that much which only has him destroying things whenever he does use it in breakdowns. He doesn't think he's very useful or even pretty and seems to do whatever people ask of him thinking that's what friends and family do even if it's horrible.
Aww, poor boy.

Mental illnesses: Autism and Slight OCD

Self Confidence level: 1% actually.
:(

Ruled by emotion/Logic or a mix: 80% Emotion and 20% logic
Me too.

Introvert or Extrovert: He's a introvert although he shows some extrovert qualities when he's with someone

Strengths:

•Potions

•Charms

•Running

•Hiding

•Loyalty
Loyalty is a good strength to have.

Weaknesses:

•Strength

•Climbing

•Transfiguration

•Quidditch

•Making friends

•Understanding socialistic/extroverted people

•Messy things

•Bright lights

•Too much noise
This is a long list haha. But very understandable and realistic.

Extra Notes:
•The book is going to be called Mismatched Socks/Silver and yellow (one of the two)
Personally, I like Mismatched Socks ;)

•Adamaris hates the Gryffindors because of their loudness
For a minute, I thought you were just going to stop at he hates the Gryffindors and I was about to be like oH NO HUN but then you continued and I was like... ok, that's reasonable.

•He has a stuffed badger toy and a stuffed snake toy
Aw, what a sweetheart.

•He hates flying and heights

•He eats a lot of sweets

•He wears mismatched and random socks a lot that are usually meant for kids
Literally me too.

Constructive Criticism: Personally, I don't think you should have him have an abusive background. Seems very forced for romantic effect. Other than that, there's nothing besides me not really liking his hair, but that's my preference.

Intrigue: 82%