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Onyx Christopher Mayfair

Submitted by: Anonymous

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Fandom or Original work- Harry Potter
I LOVE REVIEWING HARRY POTTER OCS!

Name- Onyx Christopher Mayfair
Ooo, I like his name.

Age- 11-17

Race- Aboriginal - Austrian (Born in England)

Personality- Grouchy/grumpy, hot headed/short tempered, easily annoyed, selfless, can be quite kind, loves riling people up but hates when the tables are turned, is actually quite naïve and very clean/innocent minded, has been described as an 'angry cinnamon roll', is flustered easily, reckless, rushes into things (especially when mad), reserved, a loner, honest (brutally so), insecure, stubborn as all heck, brave
I love characters who are hot heads, and I love his personality oh my goodness.

Wand- The wand is made of Willow wood with a core of Veela hair. It is 12 and a half inches long and is unyielding. Willow wood- Willow is an uncommon wand wood with healing power, and I have noted that the ideal wonder for a Willow wand often has some (usually unwarranted) insecurity, however well they may try and hide it (Garrick Ollivander's Notes) Veela hair- The wand maker Garrick Ollivander mentioned that he did not use Veela hair because it made for temperamental wands.

Background- Onyx is the result of a one night stand, his mother and father were friends and still are, so Onyx knows his biological father. He first started to develop Vitiligo when he was about 6 and has absolutely freaked out about it, first thinking that he was dying. Once he found out what it was he was disgusted with it, he hated the look of it and thought himself to be ugly because of it. He would constantly try and hide the growing splotches of white skin the best he could but it still found its way to shine through. His siblings found it cool, but would sometimes make fun of it (in the sibling way of teasing ya know?), this admittedly caused him to become more insecure. When Onyx got his letter to Hogwarts he was elated, he knew he was going to be accepted but it was still awesome! When on the train he happened to get a seat by two siblings, a Wesley, and a Japanese person (all of whom would end up being his friends).
Aww, poor Onyx. Hopefully he'll learn to love his body.

Sexuality- Pansexual, Panromantic

Friends- Rosemary Spice, Thyme Spice, Sebastian Wesley and Kuro Hideyoshi

Significant other- Unsure, either Rosemary or Kuro (has a crush on both though)

Appearance-  Onyx has Vitiligo, short soft messy/fluffy naturally black hair that has been bleached and dyed grey that is in a perpetual bed headed state, Large almost doe-like black eyes with long eyelashes (although technically a very dark brown), he's very much in shape and is very lean, has long and thin fingers and limbs, pronounced/thick/bushy eyebrows, thin lips, small button nose, has small scars littering his right hand from punching a mirror, has scars littering his body from fights (will only gain more), has been described as 'cute' looking
YES I LIVE FOR THE STRONG EYEBROWS. On a side note, I love how he's always getting into fights with people.

Distinguishing features- Vitiligo

Habits-  Bites fingers/fingernails/the inside of his cheeks/lips/hair if it's long enough/any loose things on clothing/wand, fiddles with sleeves when nervous or anxious and picks at scabs sometimes

Self-confidence level- Not very high
That explains the fighting...

Ruled by Emotion/Logic or a mix- Emotion mostly
Aww.

Introvert or Extrovert- Ambivert

Strengths- Packs a decent punch and a has a good kick, has good aim, agile, quick and nimble, physically strong

Weaknesses- Insecure, not very mentally strong strong, easily manipulated, overthinks situations, can't read body language very well
I am so glad his weaknesses actually make sense and correspond with his strengths. I'm so glad he's not overpowered haha.

Extra notes- Tends to wear oversized clothing, has had a few broken bones, this would take place in next gen. (Not exactly cursed child though. Au I guess?)

Constructive Criticism: Hmm, I don't think I have anything to criticize to be honest.

Intrigue: 98%