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Submitted by: @TheDragonHybridXD

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Name: never had a name
Interesting.

Gender: genderless ( uses they/them pronouns until evenually deciding to use him/his pronouns)
Oh, neat!

Fandom or Original: original

Plot: an alien kid who has shape-shifting and dimensional traveling powers doesn't know who they are and travel the wonders of the universe to find out
Ooo, I like this plot.

Age: somewhere in the millions but for their species very young (like, 10 years for our standards)
Oh dang. Yeah, that is young. Maybe a bit older would be better, as readers like to read their age and up, not really down.

Race: they dont know it but they are what people would call a starmite

Backround: Starmites are born from stars of any types and are basically a conscious star that function the same way but since they're much smaller than a star they live for much longer. They are all born not knowing who they are. They are also really fragile with any elements so they have to find a species to shape-shift into (I'm using shape-shift loosely here, its more like kinda growing a "shell" to protect themselves) as soon as a possible. They always have cracks from their real forms being exposed and they show on their shapeshifted forms. They also lose their emotions from a very young age. But they have the urge to get them back somehow
Dude that's sooo weird but I love it. I LOVE SCI-FI.

Talents: i'd say that they're VERY fast learners and adjust to new culture pretty well

Sexuality: asexual/aromatic

Appearence: really long bangs and hair that goes a little bit beyind their shoulders, blue eyes with the white part of the eyes being black which  technically the blue "eyes" are their heart which is like a really small star. They wear a purple sweater, black leggings, and uggs.( I'm talking about their human form here. I dunno how to describe their real body(
Cool!

Habits: they tend to ramble on and drift away from the subject. They also tend to connect science with anything, like, you can talk about yoyos and they'll find a way to the it I to a scientific conversation

Distinguishing Features: their frigin eyes and crack on their human form
Yeah, that'd probably call some attention lol.

Mental illness: not sure id call it a mental illness but they're emotionless

Self confidence level: ok so, they're kinda of a blank slate and they know this, maybe not consciously but subconsciously they acknowledge that, so they dont see them as a 'person' Y'know? They say stuff like "what you desire for my name?" Or "what you like from me?" So I can't say how much they love themself because 1. Emotionless and 2. They don't see them as a real person
Realistic for them, I applaud you.

Rule by logic or emotion: purely logic since they don't have emotions to drive them

Introvert or Extrovert: see this is also something that I can't truly answer cuz they couldn't care less about relationships, they're just interested of new species and different personalities, but if we're just looking at the surface I'd tip the scale to the extrovert side

Strengths: I wouldn't say insanely strong but pretty strong in brute force, but extremely powerful in the sense that THEY CAN TRAVEL TO DIFFERENT DIMENSIONS. And they are pretty smart and very open minded
I love this plot.

Weaknesses: honestly, if were taking about their human form here. It their eyes, cuz if you damage it, they die. And you know how stars go, and they come from a blue star so they'd probably cause a super nova (tho they are smaller than a star theyre species are as powerful as them) and then being a blank slate can cause some problems since they can be influence in various ways

Notes: honestly, this ones one of my most complicated characters cuz they're kind of above everything when it comes to culture, sure they don't know who they are, but they can discover without any sort of authority to forcefully influence them like a parent, they are only influence because they let themselves be. And if they fully figure themself out id think its more fulfilling than what we have to do in order to figure ourselves out
This is really interesting!

Constructive Criticism: Not too much, I really really love this character and plot! My only thing would be how young they are in human years, and the issue with readers.

Intrigue: 94%