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Yumi Cherika

Submitted by: @-DaddyRapmon-

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Fandom or Original work: Original work

Name: Yumi Cherika

Age: She's forty thousand years old, but looks as if she's in her early twenties.
Daaaaannngggg.

Race: She's half South Korean and Half Japanese.

Background: Unfortunately I haven't come up with a background for my OCs that all really flow and fit together.

Talents/Skills:

•Surprisingly, Yumi can sing very well.
I mean, that's a very nice skill to have but how does it contribute to the plot... speaking of the plot, I have no idea what it is.

•When Yumi was younger, she was forced to join ballet and gymnastics.
Contributes how?

•Yumi can play the guitar.

•Like her oldest brother, she has a natural talent for manipulating people. She's very charismatic.

•Yumi has extreme precision and agility.

•Yumi does well with sniper weapons.

•Yumi knows how to act.

Sexuality: Yumi is bisexual.

Significant other: Yumi currently doesn't have a significant other.

Appearance: Yumi has crimson eyes that stand out against her pale white skin. She has curly, white hair that she keeps up in a tight ponytail. She has plump lips and long eyelashes. She's truly a beautiful person. It all comes from her mother who was also very beautiful. Despite her beautiful face, she has a large, ugly scar across her back from which she has no problem in showing you. Her choice of style mostly contains black clothing.
Hmm, I think it's strange for her to have curly white hair, but I honestly don't see too much of a problem with it, besides it being used to make her stand out a lot.

Distinguishing features: The multitude of tattoos, crimson eyes, and white hair are an extreme giveaway.

Habits: Yumi has a habit of talking to herself.
Same girl.

Mental Illness: Yumi doesn't have any mental illnesses.

Self confidence level: Yumi's self confidence level is in middle. She has her moments where she can be extremely cocky and arrogant, but there are those moments where she thinks very little of herself.
I'm glad that's pretty realistic.

Ruled by Emotion/Logic or a mix: 75% emotion and 25% logic
Oooh, an uneven mix, I would love to see how her decisions would play out.

Introvert or Extrovert: Yumi is an ambivert. She has no problem meeting and talking to people, but she would rather stay at home and be by herself.
Me.

Strengths:

•Smarts•

Surprisingly, Yumi always excelled in class. Which would always surprise the teachers considering she skipped classes and it seemed like she never really paid attention when she was in class.

•Strong willed/Determined/Persistence•

When Yumi wants something, she'll get it. She's like that. She won't give up until she or whoever she's fighting for gets what they deserve.

•Loyalty•

Yumi is very loyal,especially to family. She isn't loyal to the extreme though. If you say or do something she doesn't like, she'll ditch. You have to earn her loyalty though, but once you do earn it, you won't regret it.
I'm glad she'll ditch people like that, cutting out the negative in her life.

•Tough love•

Being caring and motherly isn't really Yumi's thing. She wasn't raised that way, nor will she raise her children that way, if she has any. She won't baby you, and she won't treat like a child if you aren't one. She'll always come to defend you or comfort you in the end, just as long as you promise to not let the little things get to you.

•Brutal Honesty•

Yumi's brutal honesty goes hand in hand with her bluntness. She'll tell you something if it needs to be said without hesitation. Like I said, she won't baby you. She would rather you hear the cold hard truth than lies that'll make you feel better.

Weaknesses:

•Bluntness•

Yumi's bluntness goes hand in hand with her brutal honesty as well. Sometimes it can go too far,and she'll say something mean or rude. She won't think too much of what she said though.

•Rudeness•

To be quite blunt, Yumi is rude. She doesn't care. She'll say what she wants to you,especially if she doesn't like you. She'll insult you and tear down your self confidence with zero hesitation.

•Alcoholic•

Yumi's an alcoholic. She likes to drink. She doesn't plan on giving it up too soon. Yes, she does know what too much alcohol can do to your body. No, she doesn't care.
WHAT. DANG.

•Short temper•

Yumi's short temper always gets the best of her. When she gets angry, she gets angry. She becomes violent and rebellious.

•Kleptomania•

Now Yumi's kleptomania isn't too bad, but she should "steal" work on it.((HA!PUNS!))

•Hard headed/Stubborn•

This goes with her strong willed personality. Like I stated, when Yumi wants something, she gets it. It doesn't matter what she has to do.

Constructive Criticism: Hmm, I think my only complaint is that there aren't too many negatives to Yumi. Like, she's physically and mentally perfect, if you excuse her personality. But... then again, I'm really intrigued with her character.

Intrigue: 96%