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Aruta Williams

Submitted by: -DaddyRapmon-

Reviewed by: thief_queen

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Name: Aruta Williams
Unique name! I like it!

Age: He's twenty nine years old.
I LOVE THIS AGE.

Race: He's a demon.
Ohhh snap.

Background: Still in the making,but it's almost here ;^)

Talents/Skills:

•Surprisingly, Aruta can juggle.

(He learned it,so he could impress his younger relations when growing a relationship with them so he can use them in the future.)

•Aruta,for a short while,took a dab at fine arts,such as acting,singing,and dancing as well as learning how to play instruments. So far he has learned how to play the violin,the flute,and the saxophone.
Oh, neat.

Sexuality: He's gay as ****.
My friends.

Significant other: He's not really interested in relationships at the moment.
I'm kinda glad there's no romance in this.

Appearance: Aruta is a very intimidating man,standing at 7'2. He is very handsome and shows no signs of aging yet. He still looks as young as he did when he turned twenty years old. He normally has either a very serious or malicious expression. It matches his facial and body structure. He has pale skin along with deep blue eyes that really stand out.He used to have black hair,but he changed because he thought black hair was too boring for him. So he dyed his hair a deep blue like his eyes. His hair reaches to his shoulders and is slicked back to show his forehead. It really brings out the many features he has. You can see the freckles he has dotted all over his face and the small scar underneath his left eye. Right where the scar leads up to,he has an black eyepatch. He likes the eyepatch personally,but he'll tell you that it's a secret as to why he has it on. Something dangerous happened to him during his childhood. Aruta is very built. You can tell he works out a lot when he has free time. Most of the time,you'll see him wearing a black formal suit.
I hate how tall he is. Sorry. It's wayyyy too much. Maybe 6'7 would be better if you want him to be really tall. Jared Padalecki is 6'4 and he's already pretty freaking tall.

Distinguishing features: Aruta's blue hair and height definitely make him sight for sore eyes.

Habits:

•Aruta has a nail biting habit.

•Sometimes Aruta thinking out loud.

Mental Illness:

°Sociopathic

°Narcissism

°Depression
Dang. Sounds a bit like Sherlock.

Self confidence level: His self confidence level is obviously off the roof. He thinks he's the best thing since sliced bread. He loves himself a bit too much. There are those moments when he becomes self aware. He realizes how much of a **** head he really is. Those moments he becomes soft and easy to handle.
At least he can realize it sometimes.

Ruled by Emotion/Logic or a mix: 90% logic and 10% emotion
Makes sense.

He mostly thinks with his head which is what makes him so cold. He's a genius when it comes to people's feelings. There are the times where he can be easy to reach emotionally. You have to be extremely close to him to really see that happen though.

Introvert or Extrovert: He's an obvious extrovert.
I love it.

Strengths:

•Quick Thinking•

Aruta is a natural when it comes to unexpected and unplanned events. He'll think of the best solution to fix the problem without having to worry about a single thing.

•Strength•

Well obviously one of his strengths would be his strength. Aruta is extremely strong. The added working out to his demonic strength is what makes him this way.

•Charisma•

Aruta is what you could call smooth talker. He's very good with his words. He knows how to play with the strings of the heart. He can play every note. He's very alluring to others.

•Detecting Their Own•

When coming across a person that is demonic blooded, demons know it. Plain and simple. They know the person is demonic blooded and how strong it is. What's more – they know if coming across one of their own descendants.

(Info given by unnamed sources)

•Detecting Angelic Presence•

Demons automatically know angels, and with this, they automatically know if a person is angelic blooded. What's more, they can detect blessings (even if they don't know how to break them). They also know fallen angels, nephilim, and ascended demons on-sight.

(Info given by unnamed sources)
Pretty good strengths. It makes sense because he's a demon.

Weaknesses:

•Persistence•

Aruta doesn't know when to stop when he wants something. Sometimes he can go too far,and it can end up hurting others. It can also come back and nip him in the butt. Because of this persistence, Aruta can ruin opportunities for the company and for himself.

•Vanity/Narcissism•

Aruta is very obsessed with himself. He can be so into himself sometimes that he doesn't realize that other people exist. This can also ruin relationships and opportunities he could've had.

•Holy/Angelic items•

Being a demon,Aruta obviously cannot be around holy or angelic items such as crosses,holy water,etc.

•Romans 16:17-19•

"I appeal to you, brothers, to watch out for those who cause divisions and create obstacles contrary to the doctrine that you have been taught; avoid them. For such persons do not serve our Lord Christ, but their own appetites, and by smooth talk and flattery they deceive the hearts of the naive. For your obedience is known to all, so that I rejoice over you, but I want you to be wise as to what is good and innocent as to what is evil."

Every type of demon has their own bible scripture to rid of them. This one just happens to work on Aruta.
Huh... Interesting.

•Ascension•

Demons are not supposed to be capable of certain things. Simple, good things, like, you know, love. Demons are made to be incapable of possessing redeeming qualities. They're not supposed to be the good guys. If something goes wrong, and a demon is of a weak mind, they can ascend. In other words, they'd no longer be a demon. They're pretty much the demonic version of a fallen angel, and it's a bad thing to be.

(Info given by unnamed sources)

Constructive Criticism: I actually really like his character, although there's a few things that I don't see contributing to the plot. Personally, I would definitely change his height. He's soooooo tall. I can understand you wanting him to be tall and everything, but a few inches taller than Jared Padalecki and you'd be set.

Intrigue: 78%, due to not knowing the plot or background of this character.