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Gibbs: you ready
Ziva was about to nod when tony interrupted
Tony: I'm still not happy about my wife being used as bait
Ziva: I got myself into this mess I can get my self out
Tony growled
Tony: fine if you want to get killed
Ziva: you will protect me I know you will
Ziva walked up to him and gave him a small kiss
Gibbs: right ziva your meeting ray in a dark alley and tony will be in a dustbin next to you of you need help
Tony: what?!?
Gibbs: it will be empty, basically
Tony: Gibbs!
Ziva: do you want to protect me
Tony: fine
Gibbs: lets go
At the alley:
Gibbs: ziva you good
Ziva: yes now shut up he is here
Ray: hello ziva how are you
Ziva: what do you want ray
Ray: you obviously
Ziva: well tuff luck I have tony now and 4 kids I can't go back now
Ray: we can run away and take the kids
Ziva: tony is their father
Ray: I can become their father
Ziva: you will never be a father and you will definitely not take my children
Ray pushed ziva up against the wall and started to kiss her fiercely. When he started to undress her the team had to act
Gibbs: ray drop her now
Ray: wow 1 NCIS agent and ziva
Tony: make that 2
Tony and Gibbs had there guns pointed towards ray
Ray: still not scared
McGee: that's 3
Ray: how many do you have
By now ray was almost completely surrounded but there was still another space to be filled
Jenny: that's 4 your now surrounded give yourself up
Ray: but I also have a gun
Everyone went pale they did not think he would bring a gun
Ray pointed the gun at zivas head
Ray: you won't shoot me now
Ziva: just shoot the bastard
Ray punched her in the stomach
Ray: shut up bi**h give me your weapons or she dies
Everyone handed the weapons
Tony: don't call her that
Ray: and what are you going to do
Then he turned his gun to tony
Tony: ziva run
Ziva did so
Ray cocked his gun
Then came the bang and one person fell and died
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