ncis- the case that changed everything (now under editing)

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Hi guys thank you so much for reading

Shane's POV

I hate it here but I hate the fact more that Anna is here and I really don't want her to be in danger. Although I will never admit it to anyone I do love her. There's someone else being brought in now which will make 4 people in one tiny room. Oh yeah forgot to mention kian was brought in yesterday. He took off the mask from her it was Lucy

Shane: Lucy

No not Lucy but she was unconscious why? Then I saw it she had a bandaged around her leg with blood still seeping through

Shane+kian: NO!!! You bastard

Steve: she wouldn't come quietly

Kian: you didn't have to shoot her you could have just drugged her

Steve: I also needed to play games with your new families

Anna: your sick you know that why do you kidnap children or anyone for that matter

Steve: you better shut up or I will be delivering a dead body

Shane: you touch her and when I get out I will personally make your life hell

Steve: but that's the thing you arnt going to get out well alive anyway and I have more stuff to get on with so make yourself at home.

Lucy awoke but stayed quiet

Shane: hey lu are you ok?

Lucy: yeah fine except being kidnapped and shot in the leg

All colour was drained from her face

Lucy: and I feel ill I think this is a bad time to say this but I'm claustrophobic and asthmatic and really need an inhaler

She wheezed and coughed and wheezed some more

Shane: shit do you have one on you

Lucy: no I left it at Gibbs place

Kian: why didn't you have it on you

Lucy: I dunno I just forgot get Steve

Shane: STEVE!!!

Steve: what!!!

Shane: It's Lucy she needs an inhaler

Steve: and?

Shane: give her one please

Steve: why would I

Shane: because she was your daughters best friend

Steve: was

Shane: let me Finnish. She is also a child and killing her would not fit your pattern and me and you both know that you like patterns

Steve: I think I may have one from Jemima

He seemed more jumpy and mumbling even more now I think Lucy having a asthma attack triggered something like a memory

Then another body came but this one was much smaller but the worrying thing is that she was not moving

Amelia

Sorry it is ridiculously short but I wanted to leave it on a cliff hanger and I'm tired so yeah COMMENT VOTE AND FOLLOW PLEASE LOVE YOU ALL XXX