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    In My Opinion

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    Forever for You by dwarkaratna

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    Source: ELGANZA, INC. | AWARDS by TheCieloCommunity
    Category: Comedy
    Mature: N (blood, bullying, death, guns, loss of a loved one, medical issues, mild profanity, murder, PTSD, sexual assault, sexual references, violence)
    Status: Complete
    LGBTQIAP+: N
    Special note (judging): I had four books in this category, and the other judge (YsmeriaGuilro) had four books.
    Result: 71/100
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                                    Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...
                                
                                  
                                  
                                    
                                      
                                      
                                    
                                  
                                 
                                
    
                                
    
                                  
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    Rubric:
    - Title: 5
    - Book cover: 5
    - Description (blurb): 5
    - Plot & storytelling: 15
    - Character development: 10
    - Writing style: 10
    - Grammar: 10
    - Originality & creativity: 10
    - Emotional impact: 10
    - Pacing & structure: 5
    - Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5
    - Overall enjoyment & engagement: 10
    Total: 100
    
                                
    
                                    Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...
                                
                                  
                                  
                                    
                                      
                                      
                                    
                                  
                                 
                                
    
                                
    
                                  
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    Result: 71/100
    Title: 4/5
    I prefer capitalization in titles (Forever for You) so that's my only nitpicky complaint here. Otherwise, it's a cute, romantic title.
    Cover: 3/5
    I like the color theme and the imagery, and the font style, size, color, and placement of the title and subtitle, but I'd change the wording of the subtitle. The phrase is actually "push and pull," so I'd just swap that for "pulls and pushes." Also, the plain black text for your name feels out of place to me on this cover. I'm not sure you need to change the font style, but changing the color to something that works better with the tan color scheme would probably help.
    Blurb: 2/5
    As with Parth Probodhika, there are a lot of issues with awkward phrasing and grammatical mistakes, I'm guessing from a language barrier. I probably won't go into much detail in the grammar section for the actual story, but since this is a smaller chunk of text to work with, I'll go over what I'm seeing here and make some suggestions. (Note: The following is my first impression before reading the story. Addendum at the bottom.)
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