Raspberry by MustafaAsad6

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Source: ELGANZA, INC. | AWARDS by TheCieloCommunity
Category: Short stories

Mature: N (blood, death, loss of a loved one)

LGBTQIAP+: N

Status: Complete

Special note (judging): I had five books in this category, and the other judges (BANGTANHOLIC_FICS and Lunatic_Twilight) had five books each.

Result: 50/100

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Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...

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Rubric:
- Title: 5
- Book cover: 5
- Description (blurb): 5
- Plot & storytelling: 15
- Character development: 10
- Writing style: 10
- Grammar: 10
- Originality & creativity: 10
- Emotional impact: 10
- Pacing & structure: 5
- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5
- Overall enjoyment & engagement: 10
Total: 100

Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...

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Result: 50/100

Title: 5/5

Sure. I like raspberries. A little sweet, a little tart, and judging by the blurb, this story will be, too.

Cover: 5/5

I love this cover. It's a good example of simplicity at its best. The silhouette of a boy sitting beneath a tree; a simple title in a neat cursive; and your name. Also, this is a cover that looks like it was made for stickers, which is rarely the case, but that stickers works well here.

Blurb: 3/5

Note: The following is all based on my first impressions before I read the story. I left it here so you could see what I initially got from the blurb, and at the bottom will be an addendum with my revised suggestions after reading the story.

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