In My Opinion

Parth Probodhika by dwarkaratna

Series: Yadav Jyoti (book six)
Source: ELGANZA, INC. | AWARDS by TheCieloCommunity
Category: Romance
Mature: N (mild swearing, sexual references)
LGBTQIAP+: N
Status: Complete
Special note (judging): I had 5 books from this category, and the other judges (silksutra, Hopeless_roMINtic, Annonymouscreator) had 5, 5, and 6 books, respectively.
Result: 78/100

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Rubric:
- Title: 5
- Book cover: 5
- Description (blurb): 5
- Plot & storytelling: 15
- Character development: 10
- Writing style: 10
- Grammar: 10
- Originality & creativity: 10
- Emotional impact: 10
- Pacing & structure: 5
- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5
- Overall enjoyment & engagement: 10
Total: 100

Result: 78/100

Title: 3/5

This is a good title that sparks my interest, but you should capitalize the full title. The only word that may not need capitalization is "of," but it's not wrong to capitalize it, too.

Addendum: After I started reading, I realized this book is part of a series. The reader doesn't know that until they get into the book, though, and that would be a nice thing to know right up front, along with a note of which book they should read first, if they want to read the series in order. So, I actually would recommend putting the series name in the title and cutting the section after the colon, since that's more of a subtitle, anyway, and having it on your cover is enough. It looks like this series is called Yadav Jyoti or Subhadra? Whatever it is, I'd put that, add a #_____ (insert whatever number book this is in the series), and then do a colon, followed by "Parth Probodhika." That makes it really clear right up front, both for new readers who would prefer to start with the first book in the series, and for returning readers who finished the book before this one and want to know which book they should read next.