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    The Whimsical Coquette by strawberry1d

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    Series: CEO (book seven)
    Source: ELGANZA, INC. | AWARDS by TheCieloCommunity
    Category: Fanfiction (BTS)
    Mature: N (loss of a loved one, mild profanity, sexual references)
    LGBTQIAP+: G (brief joke)
    Status: Ongoing
    Special note (judging): I had six books in this category, and the other judges (mj3648, Lasophie79, Lunatic_Twilight) had six books each.
    Result: 90/100
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                                    Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...
                                
                                  
                                  
                                    
                                      
                                      
                                    
                                  
                                 
                                
    
                                
    
                                  
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    Rubric:
    - Title: 5
    - Book cover: 5
    - Description (blurb): 5
    - Plot & storytelling: 15
    - Character development: 10
    - Writing style: 10
    - Grammar: 10
    - Originality & creativity: 10
    - Emotional impact: 10
    - Pacing & structure: 5
    - Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5
    - Overall enjoyment & engagement: 10
    Total: 100
    
                                
    
                                    Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...
                                
                                  
                                  
                                    
                                      
                                      
                                    
                                  
                                 
                                
    
                                
    
                                  
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    Result: 90/100
    Title: 5/5
    I love this title. It's light and fun, and why shouldn't it be? Put in other words, you could say "the playful flirt," and that title is perfect for a great Chicklit book.
    Cover: 4/5
    This is a fun, cute cover to go with the title. The artwork is adorable, and if that's our whimsical coquette sitting on that desk, poor Jimin will be in for quite a ride. I love the font for the title and the little bow beside it, too. The only issue I have is with the subtitle and your name. I think the text says "stand in" right over her legs, but it's really hard to tell, because the font color is so close to her skin color. Same issue with your name. Maybe change the font color in that specific location to something else? Or move the subtitle up to come right under the title and then shift your name into a corner. Something to look at, anyway. Also, I would probably change "Whimsy" into "whimsical" and "turn" into "turns."
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