In My Opinion

RM's Rapping RV by 4everSherlocked

Source: ELGANZA, INC. | AWARDS by TheCieloCommunity
Category: Comedy
Mature: N (loss of a loved one)
LGBTQIAP+: N
Status: Ongoing
Special note (judging): I had four books in this category, and the other judge (YsmeriaGuilro) had four books.
Result: 96/100

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Rubric:
- Title: 5
- Book cover: 5
- Description (blurb): 5
- Plot & storytelling: 15
- Character development: 10
- Writing style: 10
- Grammar: 10
- Originality & creativity: 10
- Emotional impact: 10
- Pacing & structure: 5
- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5
- Overall enjoyment & engagement: 10
Total: 100

Result: 96/100

Title: 5/5

Now, this is a funny title. Color me intrigued! And I chuckled at your splashes of humor throughout Deja Vu, so if you're intentionally writing a full comedy book, I expect much laughter. Note to self: Don't eat while reading...

Cover: 5/5

This is such a fun cover for such a fun title. It's bright, flashy, and doesn't take itself too seriously. The oldie-style text with the old RV works great, and I love RM's cheeky smile. If I had any complaint, it would be that your name is a bit small, but it's still legible, and I think bumping the size up would mess this cover up, so I'd leave it alone.

Blurb: 4/5

I like it. It's short, sweet, and to the point. I think you could rework the last sentence a little, because the semicolon feels weird to me. Maybe you could add a comma after "thinks," change "as" to "and," and then...maybe a period or a hyphen would work better than the semicolon? Either would add a little more punch to the last statement, anyway, but both have a slightly different feel to them, so whatever you think works best.