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    Trapped in a Mystifying Fictional World by avniy1312

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    Source: ELGANZA, INC. | AWARDS by TheCieloCommunity
    Category: Mystery
    Mature: Y (blood, death, gore, mental health issues, murder, violence)
    LGBTQIAP+: N
    Status: Complete
    Special note (judging): I had four books in this category, and the other judges (SSears90, TJDW1989, HavvySnow, and _p1nk_tr4sh_) had four books each.
    Result: 50/100
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                                    Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...
                                
                                  
                                  
                                    
                                      
                                      
                                    
                                  
                                 
                                
    
                                
    
                                  
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    Rubric:
    - Title: 5
    - Book cover: 5
    - Description (blurb): 5
    - Plot & storytelling: 15
    - Character development: 10
    - Writing style: 10
    - Grammar: 10
    - Originality & creativity: 10
    - Emotional impact: 10
    - Pacing & structure: 5
    - Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5
    - Overall enjoyment & engagement: 10
    Total: 100
    
                                
    
                                    Rubric:- Title: 5- Book cover: 5- Description (blurb): 5- Plot & storytelling: 15- Character development: 10- Writing style: 10- Grammar: 10- Originality & creativity: 10- Emotional impact: 10- Pacing & structure: 5- Accuracy (if non-fiction): 5- ...
                                
                                  
                                  
                                    
                                      
                                      
                                    
                                  
                                 
                                
    
                                
    
                                  
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    Result: 50/100
    Title: 5/5
    Great title. This could work for many genres because it's so ambiguous, but it definitely catches attention right away.
    Cover: 5/5
    I'm not a huge fan of stickers because they clutter up covers and rarely match the theme, but that's not the author's fault, and I think it's important to display achievements. In this case, the ONC stickers go fairly well with your cover. It might look too plain without them, actually. But the image of a girl standing in the rain with an expression that could be grim acceptance or some other negative emotion works with your title to give a thriller vibe to this story, and I love what you did with the title and your name. I would never think to mix up fonts like that. It creates a puzzling, cryptic effect that adds to the mystery/thriller feel. Also, you didn't put "by" before your name, and I love you for that. I really hate when people include "by." 😅
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