JothicJeon thank you so much for requesting a review - I hope it is useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3/5
I'm not a massive fan of the picture used, and while it does definitely add a mysterious feel to the book, it doesn't really link with BTS. I think maybe a picture of a similar nature of Jungkook would be more effective as it would reflect the storyline further, but this is just personal opinion.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
5/5
I think this description sets up the book magnificently. It conveys the mystery, the excitement, and the suspense within the book which will make a potential reader definitely click to continue reading.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
5/5
I LOVE THIS PLOT! The trailer as the source material for the book is such a brilliant touch, and it really gets the reader excited for the book. You have such a brilliant concept!
I love everything from the freezing revolutionaries in ice to the murder mystery case! It's so original and something I've never seen before, especially not in Fanfiction. It's probably one of the most creative ideas for a book I've seen in a while, and I can't wait to see how it develops.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I really liked the writing in this book, and I think everything flowed very nicely. One point I did have (and it's quite minor) is just that I think you could make more of Jungkook living 500 years later. Show the shock that he experiences in this new world which has completely changed! I just think this would be the icing on the cake.
You started to note his reaction to this new world in 'III' but I think you can expand on it even further!
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
I feel like it was too early on in the book to make any real judgement on any of the characters but I think all of them were very interesting. I love how they were all revolutionaries because I think that instantly characterises them as being people to watch out for who have large and interesting personalities. I think Jungkook's POV works well in this case because it stops the story becoming confused or distracted.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I feel like it's too early on in the book to make any specific points, but I guess my advice would be to continue to characterise the other members and give them distinct personalities which the readers can connect with them through.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
I loved reading this so much, and I'm so excited to see what happens next. You have such a unique and fascinating concept so use that to your advantage and explore every aspect you can. Focus on the society, on the government, and on the boys themselves of course!
