BTS 16 shots by @seokjin_is_my_bias

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Seokjin_is_my_bias thank you for requesting a review, I hope you find it useful!

⭐️ COVER ⭐️

1.5/5

While I like the picture you have chosen, I think a cover with the actual title on would have achieved a better effect. That way the cover is more personal to the story, and is more likely to attract readers.

⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️

1/5

While I understand that it's tempting to put something like that as your description, a more effective description would link to the content of the book. This way people will have immediate faith in you as an author.

⭐️ PLOT ⭐️

3/5

It's quite hard to judge this category just given the nature of your book as it follows different plots, but I thought your one shots were good. I think perhaps a few of them were a little cliche, and so potentially you could think of how you could twist them so that they will shock the reader a little bit.

⭐️ WRITING ⭐️

3/5

I thought on the whole your writing was good, but your chapters could be lengthened out to give the storylines a little depth. I think as well the dialogue sections could have been expanded to add something a little deeper to the storylines.

⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️

I don't feel like I can really give this a rating given that there aren't solid characters, but I thought on the whole your characterisation was good. I think perhaps you could expand and deepen their characters despite the fact that it is a one shot and therefore by nature shorter.

⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️

I think you have a good starting point, you just need to expand further.

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