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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4/5
I think it's a pretty cover, and reminds me a lot of actual book covers I see for classic books which is nice. I think the waves are important in giving small hints about the story, but also indicating that there are some turbulent things going on. I think it would have been nice to see a picture of them on the cover, but I understand what aesthetic you're going for.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4.5/5
Beautiful. I mean this sums up the whole book, but I think this description is just lovely. I think perhaps you could explain the name change in the description but other than that I think it sets up the book really well.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
5/5
Magnificent. It's just great. I love the whole concept, and I think it's beautifully executed. The fact we see so many different sides of the story and understand how everyone has been affected is something that is really special. It's paced really nicely, and it's so interesting to read.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
5/5
I loved your writing style. First off, the poems are brilliant. Secondly, you had a perfect mix of beautiful description and interesting dialogue. I really liked how you purposefully built up confusion in the chapters with the names in order to reflect the confusion the characters are feeling. It just all worked really well.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
I really loved Taehyung and Jungkook - or should I say Jack and John. Also, I was a massive, massive fan of the Yoongi and Jimin subplot. I thought that was so interesting, and so well thought out.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
Change nothing! Keep writing.
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