bangtanrevolution thank you so much for requesting a review - I hope it's helpful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4.5/5
I really like this cover, and I think it works very effectively at attracting the reader with its simplicity. I love the colour scheme used and the font which really stands out against the blue and yellow.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4/5
Simple but effective. I like that it gives the reader a flavour for the story without giving too much away. The quote you've used from the book is successful in making the reader interested in what will happen in the plot, and the deadpan humour is very enticing.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
5/5
I got really invested in the storyline. I love the multiple storylines you have running alongside each other, and I particularly enjoyed the subplot with Taehyung and Namjoon. I liked your pacing as well because things seemed the develop at a natural speed so nothing felt too forced.
What I also felt when reading the book was how natural the plot felt. It didn't feel like you were forcing anything, and everything felt very logical and yet still exciting.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
There were some grammatical errors but they can be ironed out with some editing.
I liked your use of dialogue to characterise the different characters, and I thought the writing flowed very well between the different storylines. Occasionally the quick changes between narratives was slightly confusing so make sure you highlight in the first line who the section of the chapter is focusing on.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
I loved how different all your characters were, and I felt like they all had so many layers to be unraveled which was really exciting. You balanced humour and serious characterisation really well throughout the chapters, and I really enjoyed getting to know all the characters within the book.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
You said that you were worried that the plot was going everywhere, but I don't think that's really the case. The only part which I got a little confused on was the side plot with Jimin so maybe just explain more why he's so upset about Taehyung and Namjoon.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
I want to see more of Taehyung and Namjoon together because I love them! Overall, I think you have a really exciting book which hooks readers in immediately.
