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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4/5
It's a pretty cover, and I really like the picture of Jungkook that you've chosen because I think it works well with the text. Perhaps you could have put a small shadow behind the text to make it stand out a little more, but other than that I do like it.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
While it does hint at what the story is about, I think having a small two-line description underneath about what the story focuses on would help to bring some clarity to the reader when they begin the book. However, it does build up significant mystery about the book.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
3.5/5
From the first chapter I was really excited to go into this book because it felt very much like a horror/psychological thriller type book which would keep on expanding and revealing itself. However, I found that the high school sections weakened the suspense in the book, especially when it began referencing things like what the characters were wearing or Elisa and Lisa's ex-friendship etc because it ruined the tension of the book. It does still have potential to be something really cool though.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
On the whole your writing was very accurate and clear which made the plot move nicely between the chapters. I think perhaps you could have delved a little deeper into the emotions of Elisa, especially considering she has just lost her sister. You created suspense and mystery very nicely throughout the book.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
3.5/5
I liked the fact that you had a lot of mystery surrounding the characters, especially considering the nature of the plot. If I'm honest, Elisa did feel quite cliche and basic to me because we don't learn anything about her which separates her from every other girl seen in these types of fics, and so maybe you should dig deeper into her characterisation to bring out the best sides of her.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I think in general you should try and stick to the horror aspect of this book rather than focusing on the high school side just because these aspects of the book don't feel very compatible with each other.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
A really interesting concept that will be great with some tweaking!
