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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3/5
I really like the picture you've chosen and the style of the picture itself, but I think the font ruins the aesthetic of the picture. Personally I think a white font would have looked better because the brown colour is getting lost in the picture.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
Simple but effective. I think perhaps you could have added a little more detail but I understand what effect you were going for with the description.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
5/5
Not gonna lie, I wasn't sure what this was going to be like when I came into it but I was pleasantly surprised. Your story has so many twists and surprising turns, as well as juggling the really serious parts with humour. I loved the pacing in the story, and I thought that overall it was a very compelling read.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
5/5
I can't fault you. The way you use dialogue is so brilliant, and it all felt very authentic and natural whenever characters were talking with each other. It read very easily, and I didn't notice any grammatical errors.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
I love the way you went about characterising the members in this. I liked how Taeyong had so many sides to him, and learning about his past made him all the more compelling. Ten was sassy and superb, but also a sweetheart which I really loved. The way you incorporated all the members felt very natural, and you created such an interesting dynamic between all the characters.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I don't think the plot is a mess at all, in fact I think it feels beautifully planned out and organised.
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