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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4.5/5
I like your matching covers - I think they create a very cool and aesthetic effect. This cover is attractive, enticing, and looks very professional.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
5/5
I really like this description. I think it sets the tone for the book very well and allows the reader to understand what the book is about in a creative and interesting way. It's simple, but very effective.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
Obviously it's very early on in the book so I can't fully judge, but I really enjoyed the premise of this book. I think there were a lot of small touches which really made the plot stand out such as her job, her having lived in Paris, and the fact that she's moving into a new apartment.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I liked you're writing style and I thought everything flowed very nicely. Occasionally there were parts which felt really dominated with dialogue, but this seemed quite natural because we're being introduced to these characters. I liked the way you hinted subtly at Jimin's mysophobia in a very creative way, and I like the fact that you're slowly building up suspense meaning the reader is excited to see their first proper interaction.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
I thought all your characters were really animated and engaging which helped to shape the book. I think you have so much room to develop the character of Jimin and so make sure that you continue to show his growth as a character and enlighten the reader why he is the way he is. I enjoyed the humour and dialogue between the characters and it all felt very real and authentic.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I really enjoyed reading this, and I don't have any massive critique to give to you. My main point would be to just make sure you properly develop the character of Jimin and explain his past and his character just because I feel like it has the potential to be a very interesting focal point of the book.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
I think you have a great foundation for a book, and I hope that you continue to write and expand on your characters.
