sikubyun thank you for requesting a review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4/5
I think this is a really pretty cover, and I love the effect of the square with the writing around it. I also think the muted tones of the colours works really well in creating a very elegant look. My one piece of advice would be to make the title itself stand out a little more maybe by adding a shadow behind the font just because it gets lost in the picture.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4/5
Simple but effective. I think you cover all the necessary parts of the plot, and the conciseness of it builds up suspense and tension. Perhaps a quote from the book would heighten this suspense even further.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
Obviously the book has only just begun so I don't have much to base my opinions off, but I think you have a good start for the rest of the book. Your pacing was really good, and I think overall the premise of the book sounds really interesting.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I actually really liked the effect of having the speech and paragraphs split up by a considerable amount of space because it felt much easier to read. I think potentially in the future you could focus more on her inner emotions, but obviously this is the start of the book so in depth characterisation was not expected quite yet.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4.5/5
I'm refraining from marking these sections full marks just because I feel like it's too early on in the book to judge (and it's not so much a reflection on the book itself). I really liked the dynamic you had between your characters and their dialogue felt very authentic and natural.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
It's early days but I think if you continue the way you're going, you're onto having a great book!
