SexyPJiminie thank you for requesting a review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3/5
I'm not a massive fan of the font you've used for the text, but I do like the picture you've chosen. It gives the book a very artistic look, and I think the stickers help give the book a sense of integrity and credibility.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
2/5
I think sometimes one sentence descriptions work well, but this book needs a bit more explanation to help entice a reader. You have a really interesting plot, and I think you could built up a lot of suspense and tension in the description by illuminating what the book focuses on.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
I think you have the potential for a really interesting plot, and I enjoyed watching it unravel. Your main character is very interesting, and I thought you developed her very cleverly throughout the book. I also really enjoyed your use of flashbacks to highlight her past as it helped explain why she is the way she is today.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4.5/5
I think your writing was really beautiful and descriptive for most of the book. I loved the way you had the normal narration and the thoughts in her head because it created a really interesting dynamic in the writing as well as building mystery.
However, I felt like there were some things which weren't explained as well as they could have been such as the flashback of her past. I think that could be expanded on and made into a chapter of its own.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
I think you have a really interesting relationship between Y/N and Yoongi which is really shown to develop and grow as the plot continues. I think you could explore her character even further later on the book just because of the nature of her character. You have so much to unlock with her.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
Other than a few parts which felt underdeveloped, I think you managed to create a really good atmosphere of mystery in the book.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
Continue to dig deep into the emotions of your characters and continue building tension between them, and you should be onto a great book!
