Yugeniverse thank you so much for requesting another review - I hope you find it equally as helpful as the first one!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3.5/5
I like the simplicity of it, and I think it works well to have a picture which is taken far away so that you have more space for the title. Personally, I'm not a huge fan of the font but that may just be my preference and so take that with a touch of salt.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3/5
I liked what you were going for in the description, and I think it does build up some suspense and intrigue about the book itself. However, I think it could be made shorter just so it's more impactful - for example I don't think you need the 'he changed my life bit'.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
I love that this is a bit of a crack fic, and I did thoroughly enjoy reading. I'm a sucker for a college setting so I did really enjoy that aspect of it, and I thought your pacing worked well. I also loved how self-aware this book was; I mean the first line let me know that it was going to be a satire of cliche Fanfiction.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4.5/5
Yes. I loved it. Your humour was on point, and I thought the interactions between characters were funny and exciting. I loved the references you made to both k-pop and popular culture in general. I didn't notice any grammatical mistakes, and overall I thought you got the tone of the book just right.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
I liked all of your characters, and I thought they all interacted with each other in really natural ways which is difficult to achieve as a writer. I think potentially you can go further into the characters and look past the comedy, especially around y/n because of her past and the fact that's she in an orphanage.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
A very entertaining way to spend my evening, and it made me laugh out loud!
