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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3/5
I get that it's a matching cover with your other covers, but I just think the fact that word 'Halloween' has to be broken up kind of ruins the overall cover because it looks a little strange. I also get major Christmas vibes from this cover, and I think potentially it could be more Halloween-based.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4/5
I think for a short story it works well and builds up mystery about the story! Potentially you could have used one of funnier quotes from the story, maybe one of the lines from the text conversation between them in chapter 3.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
I thought this was a really fun, light-hearted story which was nice to read. As a one-shot I think it works really well, and what I liked was how you still managed to develop your characters despite it being a short story.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4.5/5
I didn't notice any major grammatical mistakes, and I thought overall this was really well written. You had a really good pace, and the writing was funny, quick, and witty. I liked the text conversation between the pair because that was really funny, something which can be hard to achieve in text conversations.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
Mina was really likeable, and I felt second hand embarrassment when she confessed her feelings to him at the Halloween party! I thought maybe you could have done more with the character of Jungkook just because we're told that he's really arrogant at school but we don't really see that very much in the story.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
As for your concerns over how funny it was, I thought it was comical. It was very lighthearted which aided itself nicely to the humour in the book, and I think the interactions between Mina and Jungkook had a very nice dynamic, and back-and-forth aspect to the jokes worked really well.
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