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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
2/5
I understand the aesthetic, but it doesn't suit the vibe of this story. I think a much darker picture which had some more relation to supernatural content would have been more fitting.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
2.5/5
It builds up suspense, but it doesn't tell us anything about the storyline inside. While sometimes one line descriptions can be quite edgy, I think the nature of your plot needed a little more building up in the description so that people knew what a cool premise it has.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4.5/5
I really enjoyed this! I'm not usually a huge fan of supernatural stories, but I thought the level of detail and thought you put into it was great. I loved learning about the dynamics of the supernatural world, and watching as the characters progressed.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I thought the length of your chapters worked well in building up the pace of the story, and I thought on the whole your writing flowed well. I think potentially you could have dug into the inner thoughts of Areum a bit more - specifically about her mother.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4.5/5
I really liked all your characters! I thought Areum had a lot more beneath the surface than I initially thought, and she was really interesting to watch. I also really liked Yoongi and Namjoon because they were super funny and added a really light tone to the book which kept it interesting. I was very intrigued by the mother figure and what happened to her.
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