fate by @nemsaa

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Nemsaa thank you so much for requesting a review - I hope it's useful!

⭐️ COVER ⭐️

3/5

I really like the picture you've chosen of Jin because I think it does emphasise the CEO part of the story (and he looks amazing). I'm not a huge fan of either of the fonts though just cause I think the colours don't really go with the rest of the cover and the text doesn't really stand out.

⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️

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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️

4/5

I thought perhaps the quote felt a little unnecessary just because it didn't really add to our understanding of the book, but I thought as a whole the description worked well in explaining the premise of the story.

⭐️ PLOT ⭐️

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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️

4.5/5

There are so few stories out there about single mums, and I thought you did a great job portraying Nihee! The pace of the story worked really well, and I thought in general you had a really compelling plot.

⭐️ WRITING ⭐️

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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️

3.5/5

In the first few chapters I did notice a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, and so when you have time potentially read through those chapters and edit these out. I thought overall your writing style was really nice and helped move the plot along. Potentially some chapters had too much dialogue and not enough description, but I'm sure you can delve into the emotions of the characters later on in the book.

⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️

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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️

4/5

I really liked all your characters, and I thought they interacted well with each other. Nihee was very likeable, and I thought she was a really interesting characters just because of how strong she has to be as a single mother. I also really liked Jin and Namjoon because of their banter with each other!

 I also really liked Jin and Namjoon because of their banter with each other!

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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️

Regarding your concerns about the child, I thought you did that really well! In fact, my favourite interactions in the book were with Hansung.

⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️

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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️

I'm sure you have a very exciting and beautiful book in store!

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