Masakali_ thank you so much for requesting a review - I hope you find it useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
2/5
I like what you were going for with cover in trying to properly convey the setting of the story but the execution kind of ruins the effect you were going for. Instead of having Jungkook in black and white, potentially you could find a picture of him in colour as it would blend in more with the background and look more natural. As well as this, I think a different font for the title would help bring the cover together and make it look more professional as the two fonts don't really work together.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
I liked the poetic nature of the description, and I thought it definitely built up suspense for the book. However, after reading the book I wasn't sure whether the description really matches the tone of the story. The description feels very sad, which is a complete contrast to the story inside, and so potentially a better fitting description would be one that focused on the more comical side of the story.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
I liked the plot of the book; I thought it was original and exciting, and you definitely know how to build up suspense. I also have no idea where it will go next which is really exciting for me as a reader. Will they ever get out of the forest? Will they fall in love? Will they find a way to communicate through the language barrier? The fact that I have these questions shows how interesting the plot is as you want to keep readers on the edge of their seat - well done!
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
3/5
One pet peeve I have in books is when they start along the lines of 'hi, my name is...' and so when I read that I wasn't sure what I was going to think of the book, but overall I thought your writing was really clear and exciting. I think potentially you could delve more into her feelings, but I understand that you'll probably want to do that as the book progresses later on.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4.5/5
First off, I loved the fact that you had an Indian MC - we stan diversity in fanfic. I think Jeena came across as very likeable and relatable, although sometimes she seemed a little over dramatic. I really liked the way you did Jungkook, and I loved that he seemed really sweet and caring.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
I think you have a good start for a really exciting book, and I hope you continue to develop these amazing characters.
