chimpeanut thank you for requesting a review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3.5/5
I think it's a nice cover and very cool, but it just doesn't really match the subject matter of the book. I think something which linked more the idea of royalty would have worked better for this book because this cover doesn't really convey that idea.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4.5/5
I like the section of the book that you've used because it introduces both the characters and the plot, maintaining suspense and mystery for the book.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
5/5
This was the book that kept on giving! I loved the plot of this; it was so exciting and interesting, with so many layers that it never got boring. There are so many mysterious things happening, and I can tell that the mystery will unravel in a very interesting way. I also want to know what the deal is with all the strawberries?!
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
5/5
Good pace, strong grammar, and exciting dialogue. I really loved the bits you included between Areum and Haneul because it created a really interesting dynamic to the chapters. Overall, the writing really helped the book to flow beautifully.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
Loved Haneul! She was so much fun, and so relatable. I also loved how positive and kind she was. I really liked seeing Jungkook's character development, and I can't wait to see why he was so moody before. There are lots of unanswered questions about the characters which makes them all very intriguing - especially Jimin.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I really enjoyed your writing! I think potentially you could go more into the emotions of Haneul but overall I think it was all done very nicely.
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