_peachypie thank you requesting a review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4/5
It's a really cool cover which definitely matches the tone of the story, and I love the way the red and black colours work together. I also really like the way the two fonts work together because I think it creates a really interesting visual effect. Personally, I think a picture of an NCT member would have been better for the cover just because of the nature of the story.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
5/5
You manage to convey the premise of the plot in a really creative and intriguing way which still builds up suspense and mystery. It definitely made me excited to read the story, and so I think it is successful in attracting readers.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
Clearly it's early days with the book so I don't have much to work off, but it feels like you have a really interesting plot. You manage to build up mystery and suspense really well, meaning that readers will be on the edge of their seat to find out what happens next.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4.5/5
I thought you had a really good balance between dialogue and description within the chapters, and I noticed no grammatical mistakes which meant that the writing flowed well.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
I don't have that much to base my judgement off, but I thought your protagonist felt very likeable because of her vulnerability in the situation as well as her morals. I didn't get much of a sense of the members in the chapters that were there so I can't comment on that yet, but I liked the character lists you did in the first few chapters because I thought that was really creative.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I think you are heading in the right direction, and if you continue on the way you are going I think you will be set for a great book.
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