curiouspaprika thank you so much for requesting a review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3.5/5
I do really like the picture you've chosen because I think it does create a sense of vulnerability and a softness to the book. However, I think you could have picked a font which stood out more because the text is slightly lost in the clouds.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
I think you do build up anticipation and suspense for the book in the description, but it's just a bit too long. Potentially a shorter quote from the book would gain the same effect but would be a bit punchier as your description.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
I thought it was really interesting that you focused on Jimin's insecurities about his body, and I think it made the book feel very intimate. It's a topic which isn't talked about a lot in society, and so I was really glad to see you shedding light on it. I thought for the most part your pacing was really good, and the plot flowed very naturally.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
There were no obvious massive grammatical errors, and I thought overall your writing really helped move the story along nicely. I also thought you had a nice balance of showing us the emotions of the characters and describing what they were doing. My only critique would be to continue developing Taehyung's emotions which aren't revolved around Jimin to further expand on his character.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4.5/5
I really liked all your characters, and I thought you showed their differences really nicely. As I said before, I really liked what you did with the character of Jimin and I feel like you have a lot of room to continue to develop him further. I also really liked the way you presented Taehyung as it felt very authentic and real.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
You asked if I thought the story was too simple, and honestly there's no such thing. I think as long as you have interesting characters, writing, and development no story can be too simple. If you're concerned about that, maybe think about including a plot twist which feels natural in the story (i.e. Don't just throw one in for the sake of it).
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