Lovely_7D thank you so much for requesting a review - I hope it's useful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
3.5/5
I do like the aesthetic of the cover overall, and I think the font works really well with the white background and picture. However, I'm not a huge fan of the danger sign in the corner just because I feel like it doesn't quite go with the rest of the cover. I think potentially the cover could have reflected the story a little more by using slightly more intense and darker colours, but it still makes for a cool cover now.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4.5/5
I think you expertly build up suspense and mystery to your plot which makes it seem very intriguing to the reader. I liked the way you differentiated between all the characters as well because it created a really dramatic effect.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4/5
You have a super cool plot! I loved the element of magic, I loved the idea of a rebellion group, I loved the fighting. There were a few plot holes which confused me a little regarding whether the main character is a time traveller or not just because of her comment about the sneakers and so potentially you could look and see how you could explain some aspects better. However, overall I thought you had a really creative idea.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4.5/5
What struck me first about your writing style was how professional it sounded, and it really felt like I was reading a fantasy novel. Potentially some parts of the dialogue lost the momentum which was built up by your descriptive paragraphs but that was just a small thing I noticed.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
4/5
It's too early on to say at the minute about any of the characters, but I thought your main character seemed really interesting and funny which made her instantly likeable to me. I think you have such interesting ideas to play with, and so your characterisation should be really cool and creative!
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