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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
4/5
Your aesthetic is super cute, and I do think this is a really nice cover. Perhaps the text could have been a little bigger just so it would be easier to read, but overall I like the font and colours you've chosen a lot.
⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
3.5/5
We definitely get a sort of 'romantic but also a bit dangerous' from this description, but that's all. I think it would be better to have a little summary underneath just briefly explaining the overall plot.
⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4.5/5
I did really enjoy getting to grips with this new world of erotica, gangs, and pillows (😂). It was a really fascinating plot, and I liked how the slightly darker undertones set the mood for the story. I think perhaps the gang thing could have been explained a little more as I felt a bit lost at points, but other than that I did really enjoy it.
⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
5/5
I really liked your writing style, and I thought the chapters were compelling and exciting. It was beautifully crafted, and I thought it had a really professional vibe to it.
⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
I really liked Mao! She was a really interesting character to get to know because she has so many sides, and I thought she was a really great character to pick as the focaliser of the book. I also found the character of Minghao to be very intriguing, and I feel like there is a lot more to him than meets the eye.
⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I thought on the whole your mature scenes were really good, and you managed to make them very sensual which I really enjoyed. You have such an erotic concept and I think potentially adding a bit more eye contact/dialogue between Mao and Minghao would really heighten the eroticism.
⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
Really cool book! Great work!
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