Taedreamer02 thank you so much for requesting a review - I hope it's helpful!
⭐️ COVER ⭐️
2/5
I think the fact that you've chosen a picture of Jin when he looks sad is a nice way to set the tone of the book, and let the reader know that it will be centred around heartbreak. However, I think the font you've used doesn't do the cover any favours and doesn't fit with the picture you've used because it doesn't stand out enough. Because it's quite a thin font, it gets lost in the picture.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4/5
I love the effect that you create through the repetition of the word 'perfect'! It's something that I haven't seen other people do in their descriptions, and it makes a really lovely accumulating effect when you read it. You sell the premise of the book really well, and overall I think it's very enticing for a reader.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐
4.5/5
Gah, this book made me so happy! I loved how you showed us both perspectives in the relationship, and it was beautifully crafted. The pacing was perfect, the tension and suspense you built was beautiful, and the character development you showed was brilliant.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
5/5
You are an amazing writer! I loved every single chapter, and I particularly loved the mirroring of the first and last chapter. I thought your description was beautiful, the length of the chapters was perfect, and it flowed so beautifully.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
They felt so real! That was the main thing I took away from it. The way that Jin and Y/N interacted was so natural and authentic, and I thought that was one of the really special parts that I took away from reading this book. You could really feel the love between the characters, and that is something which is really hard to achieve in a book.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
As for your tone and balance, I thought both were spot on. The first few chapters of the book were so beautifully done, and those really set the tone for the book overall.
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⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️
You have a phenomenal book with a love story which feels raw and real. Keep writing more books like it!
