kpop book reviews

love triangle by @merryasaberry

merryasaberry thank you for requesting a review - I hope you find it helpful!

⭐️ COVER ⭐️

3.5/5

I like the vibe of the cover, and I think it represents the wistful longing of Taeyong. However, I'm not a huge fan of the font and I think perhaps a more delicate font would have looked better with the picture.

⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️

3.5/5

For me, this description was a little too clunky and it took a couple times reading it to understand what was happening. I think because this is a fairly short story, the description could be a little more concise and shorter.

⭐️ PLOT ⭐️

5/5

I LOVED THIS! I literally absorbed this book, and I couldn't stop reading. The twists and turns that happened were so much fun, and I got so invested in the story. It made my heart very happy.

⭐️ WRITING ⭐️

4.5/5

This worked really well as a short story, and I liked that the chapters were quite fast paced and short. I thought you had a great balance of dialogue and description, and I really felt like I was getting a real sense of who the characters were.

⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️

5/5

I've been waiting to review a jaeyong fic because this was so freakin cute and I love them! I loved how genuine their relationship seemed, and the dynamic between them felt very natural and authentic.

⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️

You expressed some concerns about now showing the emotions of the characters well, but I would argue against that. As someone who has been in a very similar situation to Taeyong, I really connected with the way he was feeling. One of the most poignant scenes was the one when he was watching Jaehyun sleep because I think that action alone displayed more than 1,000 words of description about his emotions could.

⭐️ OVERALL ⭐️

Please write more fluffy fics!