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⭐️ COVER ⭐️
2.5/5
I'm not a huge fan of this cover just because I don't think the red font goes well with the background picture. It kind of merges into the background because the red is too dark. I think perhaps using a picture that had more red in it/ had a red effect on it and then a black or white font would create the same effect while being easier to read.
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⭐️ DESCRIPTION ⭐️
4/5
I like the way your description tells us a lot about the plot while still remaining mysterious. It does build up suspense for the book, and definitely has quite a horror vibe to it. You need a paragraph break between the sentences though.
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⭐️ PLOT ⭐️
4.5/5
Seeing as the book has just started I don't feel like I can rate it full marks, but this was very interesting. I liked the horror aspects of the story, and I can tell that you have a lot to play about with for the future plot. It was something very unique that I haven't seen anything like before.
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⭐️ WRITING ⭐️
4/5
I thought on the whole your writing was very clear and flowed well which aided the progression of the story. Some parts felt a little informal for the tone of the story, but on the whole I thought you got the general tone spot on. You also created a great deal of mystery and suspense in the chapters which worked really well with the story.
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⭐️ CHARACTERS ⭐️
5/5
I think the real star of your book has to be the characters. Taehyung is infinitely fascinating, and is a real showstopping character in my eyes because you have so much potential to do really cool things with him. Jungkook also seems very mysterious and interesting.
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⭐️ SPECIFIC POINTS ⭐️
I don't think your story or writing is cliche at all, and I think it has the promise to be a really cool book!
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